Keats: Poems Published in 1820
tall oaks
Branch-charmèd by the earnest stars,

or of the

dismal cirque
Of Druid stones, upon a forlorn moor,
When the chill rain begins at shut of eve,
In dull November, and their chancel vault,
The heaven itself, is blinded throughout night.

This Keats, and Keats alone, could do; and his achievement is unique in throwing all the glamour of romance over a fragment 'sublime as Aeschylus'.

NOTES ON HYPERION.

Book I.

Page 145. ll. 2-3. By thus giving us a vivid picture of the changing day—at morning, noon, and night—Keats makes us realize the terrible loneliness and gloom of a place too deep to feel these changes.

l. 10. See how the sense is expressed in the cadence of the line.

Page 146. l. 11. voiceless. As if it felt and knew, and were deliberately silent.

ll. 13, 14. Influence of Greek sculpture. See Introduction, p. 248.

l. 18. nerveless . . . dead. Cf. Eve of St. Agnes, l. 12, note.

l. 19. realmless eyes. The tragedy of his fall is felt in every feature.

ll. 20, 21. Earth, His ancient mother. Tellus. See Introduction, p. 244.

Page 147. l. 27. Amazon. The Amazons were a warlike race of women of whom many traditions exist. On the frieze of the Mausoleum (British Museum) they are seen warring with the Centaurs.

l. 30. Ixion's wheel. For insolence to Jove, Ixion was tied to an ever-revolving wheel in Hell.

l. 31. Memphian sphinx. Memphis was a town in Egypt near to which the pyramids were built. A sphinx is a great stone image with human head and breast and the body of a lion.

Page 148. ll. 60-3. The thunderbolts, being Jove's own weapons, are unwilling to be used against their former master.

Page 149. l. 74. branch-charmed . . . stars. All the magic of the still night is here.

ll. 76-8. Save . . . wave. See how the gust of wind comes and goes in the rise and fall of these lines, which begin and end on the same sound.

Page 150. l. 86. See Introduction, p. 248.

l. 94. aspen-malady, trembling like the leaves of the aspen-poplar.

Page 151. ll. 98 seq. Cf. King Lear. Throughout the figure of Saturn—the old man robbed of his kingdom—reminds us of Lear, and sometimes we seem to detect actual reminiscences of Shakespeare's treatment. Cf. Hyperion, i. 98; and King Lear, i. iv. 248-52.

l. 102. front, forehead.

l. 105. nervous, used in its original sense of powerful, sinewy.

ll. 107 seq. In Saturn's reign was the Golden Age.

Page 152. l. 125. of ripe progress, near at hand.

l. 129. metropolitan, around the chief city.

l. 131. strings in hollow shells. The first stringed instruments were said to be made of tortoise-shells with strings stretched across.

Page 153. l. 145. chaos. The confusion of elements from which the world was created. See Paradise Lost, i. 891-919.

l. 147. rebel three. Jove, Neptune, and Pluto.

Page 154. l. 152. covert. Cf. Isabella, l. 221; Eve of St. Agnes, l. 188.

ll. 156-7. All the dignity and majesty of the goddess is in this comparison.

Page 155. l. 171. gloom-bird, the owl, whose cry is supposed to portend death. Cf. Milton's method of description, 'Not that fair field,' etc. Paradise Lost, iv. 268.

l. 172. familiar visiting, ghostly apparition.

Page 157. ll. 205-8. Cf. the opening of the gates of heaven. Paradise Lost, vii. 205-7.

ll. 213 seq. See Introduction, p. 248.

Page 158. l. 228. effigies, visions.

l. 230. O . . . pools. A picture of inimitable chilly horror.

l. 238. fanes. Cf. Psyche, l. 50.

Page 159. l. 246. Tellus . . . robes, the earth mantled by the salt sea.

Page 160. ll. 274-7. colure. One of two great circles supposed to intersect at right angles at the poles. The nadir is the lowest point in the heavens and the zenith is the highest.

Page 161. ll. 279-80. with labouring . . . centuries. By studying the sky for many hundreds of years wise men found there signs and symbols which they read and interpreted.

Page 162. l. 298. demesnes. Cf. Lamia, ii. 155, note.

ll. 302-4. all along . . . faint. As in l. 286, the god and the sunrise are indistinguishable to Keats. We see them both, and both in one. See Introduction, p. 248.

l. 302. rack, a drifting mass of distant clouds. Cf. Lamia, i. 178, and Tempest, iv. i. 156.

Page 163. ll. 311-12. the powers . . . creating. Coelus and Terra (or Tellus), the sky and earth.

Page 164. l. 345. Before . . . murmur. Before the string is drawn tight to let the arrow fly.

Page 165. l. 349. region-whisper, whisper from the wide air.

Book II.

Page 167. l. 4. Cybele, the wife of Saturn.

Page 168. l. 17. stubborn'd, made strong, a characteristic coinage of Keats, after the Elizabethan manner; cf. Romeo and Juliet, iv. i. 16.

ll. 22 seq. Cf. i. 161.

l. 28. gurge, whirlpool.

Page 169. l. 35. Of . . . moor, suggested by Druid stones near Keswick.

l. 37. chancel vault. As if they stood in a great temple domed by the sky.

Page 171. l. 66. Shadow'd, literally and also metaphorically, in the darkness of his wrath.

l. 70. that second war. An indication that Keats did not intend to recount this 'second war'; it is not likely that he would have forestalled its chief incident.

l. 78. Ops, the same as Cybele.

l. 79. No shape distinguishable. Cf. Paradise Lost, ii. 666-8.

Page 172. l. 97. mortal, making him mortal.

l. 98. A disanointing poison, taking away his kingship and his godhead.

Page 173. ll. 116-17. There is . . . voice. Cf. i. 72-8. The mysterious grandeur of the wind in the trees, whether in calm or storm.

Page 174. ll. 133-5. that old . . . darkness. Uranus was the same as Coelus, the god of the sky. The 'book' is the sky, from which ancient sages drew their lore. Cf. i. 277-80.

Page 175. l. 153. palpable, having material existence; literally, touchable.

Page 176. l. 159. unseen parent dear. Coelus, since the air is invisible.

l. 168. no . . . grove. 'Sophist and sage' suggests the philosophers of ancient Greece.

l. 170. locks not oozy. Cf. Lycidas, l. 175, 'oozy locks'. This use of the negative is a reminiscence of Milton.

ll. 171-2. murmurs . . . sands. In this description of the god's utterance is the whole spirit of the element which he personifies.

Page 177. ll. 182-7. Wise as Saturn was, the greatness of his power had prevented him from realizing that he was neither the beginning nor the end, but a link in the chain of progress.

Page 178. ll. 203-5. In their hour of downfall a new dominion is revealed to them—a dominion of the soul which rules so long as it is not afraid to see and know.

l. 207. though once chiefs. Though Chaos and Darkness once had the sovereignty. From Chaos and Darkness developed Heaven and Earth, and from them the Titans in all their glory and power. Now from them develops the new order of Gods, surpassing them in beauty as they surpassed their parents.

Page 180. ll. 228-9. The key of the whole situation.

ll. 237-41. No fight has taken place. The god has seen his doom and accepted the inevitable.

Page 181. l. 244. poz'd, settled, firm.

Page 183. l. 284. Like . . . string. In this expressive line we hear the quick patter of the beads. Clymene has had much the same experience as Oceanus, though she does not philosophize upon it. She has succumbed to the beauty of her successor.

Page 184. ll. 300-7. We feel the great elemental nature of the Titans in these powerful similes.

l. 310. Giant-Gods? In the edition of 1820 printed 'giant, Gods?' Mr. Forman suggested the above emendation, which has since been discovered to be the true MS. reading.

Page 185. l. 328. purge the ether, clear the air.

l. 331. As if Jove's appearance of strength were a deception, masking his real weakness.

Page 186. l. 339. Cf. i. 328-35, ii. 96.

ll. 346-56. As the silver wings of dawn preceded Hyperion's rising so now a silver light heralds his approach.

Page 187. l. 357. See how the light breaks in with this line.

l. 366. and made it terrible. There is no joy in the light which reveals such terrors.

Page 188. l. 374. Memnon's image. Memnon was a famous king of Egypt who was killed in the Trojan war. His people erected a wonderful statue to his memory, which uttered a melodious sound at dawn, when the sun fell on it. At sunset it uttered a sad sound.

l. 375. dusking East. Since the light fades first from the eastern sky.

Book III.

Page 191. l. 9. bewildered shores. The attribute of the wanderer transferred to the shore. Cf. Nightingale, ll. 14, 67.

l. 10. Delphic. At Delphi worship was given to Apollo, the inventor and god of music.

Page 192. l. 12. Dorian. There were several 'modes' in Greek music, of which the chief were Dorian, Phrygian, and Lydian. Each was supposed to possess certain definite ethical characteristics. Dorian music was martial and manly. Cf. Paradise Lost, i. 549-53.

l. 13. Father of all verse. Apollo, the god of light and song.

ll. 18-19. Let the red . . . well. Cf. Nightingale, st. 2.

l. 19. faint-lipp'd. Cf. ii. 270, 'mouthed shell.'

l. 23. Cyclades. Islands in the Aegean sea, so called because they surrounded Delos in a circle.

l. 24. Delos, the island where Apollo was born.

Page 193. l. 31. mother fair, Leto (Latona).

l. 32. twin-sister, Artemis (Diana).

l. 40. murmurous . . . waves. We hear their soft breaking.

Page 196. ll. 81-2. Cf. Lamia, i. 75.

l. 82. Mnemosyne, daughter of Coelus and Terra, and mother of the Muses. Her name signifies Memory.

l. 86. Cf. Samson Agonistes, ll. 80-2.

l. 87. Cf. Merchant of Venice, i. i. 1-7.

l. 92. liegeless, independent—acknowledging no allegiance.

l. 93. aspirant, ascending. The air will not bear him up.

Page 197. l. 98. patient . . . moon. Cf. i. 353, 'patient stars.' Their still, steady light.

l. 113. So Apollo reaches his divinity—by knowledge which includes experience of human suffering—feeling 'the giant-agony of the world'.

Page 198. l. 114. gray, hoary with antiquity.

l. 128. immortal death. Cf. Swinburne's Garden of Proserpine, st. 7.

Who gathers all things mortal
With cold immortal hands.

Page 199. l. 136. Filled in, in pencil, in a transcript of Hyperion by Keats's friend Richard Woodhouse—

Glory dawn'd, he was a god.

FOOTNOTES:

[245:1] 'If any apology be thought necessary for the appearance of the unfinished poem of Hyperion, the publishers beg to state that they alone are responsible, as it was printed at their particular request, and contrary to the wish of the author. The poem was intended to have been of equal length with Endymion, but the reception given to that work discouraged the author from proceeding.'

[247:1]
e.g. i. 56 Knows thee not, thus afflicted, for a god
i. 206 save what solemn tubes
.  .  .  .  . gave
ii. 70 that second war
Not long delayed.
[247:2]
e.g. ii. 8 torrents hoarse
32 covert drear
i. 265 season due
286 plumes immense
[247:3]
e.g. i. 35 How beautiful . . . self
182 While sometimes . . . wondering men
ii. 116, 122 Such noise . . . pines.
[247:4]
e.g. ii. 79 No shape distinguishable. Cf. Paradise Lost, ii. 667.
i. 2 breath of morn. Cf. Paradise Lost, iv. 641.

HENRY FROWDE, M.A.
PUBLISHER TO THE UNIVERSITY OF OXFORD
LONDON, EDINBURGH, NEW YORK, TORONTO AND MELBOURNE


TRANSCRIBER'S NOTES:

Line numbers are placed every ten lines. In the original, due to space constraints, this is not always the case.

Ellipses match the original.

On page 237, the note for l. 25 refers to "Lamia, i. 9, note". There is no such note.

The following words appear with and without hyphens. They have been left as in the original.

bed-side bedside
church-yard churchyard
death-bell deathbell
demi-god demigod
no-where nowhere
re-united reunited
sun-rise sunrise
under-grove undergrove
under-song undersong

The following words have variations in spelling. They have been left as in the original.

Æolian Aeolian
Amaz'd Amazed
branch-charmed Branch-charmèd
faery fairy
should'st shouldst
splendor splendour